I don't want to go in there the balls looks like rocks and the ladder is big but the stairs are scary too.
it looks like it is going to gobble me up what am I going to do?
is some one going to save me I hope I wuduth how?
uuuuu! I feke I can see some one it is gole's theey mit be like me on no they are not like me.
This is my draft writing (my teacher checked some of my spelling for me). Please make a comment.
To Kasiti
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote that the slide was going to gobble you up and how the balls looked like rocks.
Does the boy go down the slide? Can you weite the next part of this story for me.
Mrs Natusch
To Mrs Natusch
DeleteI did what you wrote to me. If you see some spelling mistakes tell me.
from Kasiti
To Kasiti
ReplyDeleteI liked all of your writing.
You need to work on typing your words correct.
Do you enjoy writing?
From Debbie.
To Kasiti
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great post.
You need to proof read your writing.
From Katherine