Thursday, August 23, 2012

Writing

Wow! That looks scary to go down I would not go in  I would be too scared.
I don't want to go in there the balls looks like rocks and the ladder is big but the stairs are scary too.
it looks like it is going to gobble me up what am I going to do?
is some one going to save me I hope I wuduth how?
uuuuu! I feke I can see some one it is gole's theey mit be like me on no they are not like me.

This is my draft writing (my teacher checked some of my spelling for me). Please make a comment.

Friday, August 17, 2012