Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Writing

There were 9 turtles in the red sky  and a man jumped on a green turtle and he went to green land. Everything was green except the pond it was yellow and the pool is too.
It had food that was purple. The fish is blue and the grass is red the dogs are orange the tattle took him.
Back to his ship. He waved good bye.

This is my draft writing. Please leave a comment.

2 comments:

  1. To Kasit

    I liked how the grass was red.
    You spelt turtle wrong.

    From Aaron

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    1. To Aaron
      Thank you Aaron for telling me.
      Do you now where some more are?
      fro kasiti

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